vox nihili

I'll ignore the fact that Thien has already done an editing....I'm gonna give you an edit Vox-style.... This is an essay that I had to do for a history fair. ...

Pretty cool. It's an engrossing read. I didn't quite see a point to it, but I am not always very good in the main idea area. Pretty good. I loved ...

So this was Bob's masterpiece. I think the one thing about this that redeems all the "I am Bob, Bob is I" thing is the fact that..well, it does. Sort ...

I don't want to sound harsh, I'm just critiquing, so here goes.. 1: there is an inherent lack of punctuation. Look it up here at YWS in that search box. ...

Okay. I am very blunt and down to business, so any harsh criticism, please don't take it personally...I am just trying to make this poem better... 1: you use way ...

Wow. I'd do it in all capitals if it wasn't sort of prohibited. ;) I'll gush over how the poem moves me first, then criticize. It's a sad poem to ...

i will go through and essentially comment on all the things I find to be worth mentioning. Please don't take the critcism as an insult..It's just suggestions. So here I ...

Wow. I really liked this. It expresses...I don't know. There's something really important about eyes. I like to look at people's eye color when the light hits it just right ...

Okay. First off, I want to say: congratulations. You've written something that matters. I've written poetry before, but it didn't feel like the poetry I am writing now. You're written ...

I must admit, I didn't read the entire thing...but it honestly rhymes too much... Not to mention some of the rhymes sounded corny, and not all of the lyrics made ...

Awesome! Very dramatic. I loved it. Execept...what are gaffes? That part I don't get, but it was a really intense...and it made sense. The last rhyme was sort of awkward, ...

Unwind my fingers From around your wrists scratch the around. Push my face away, push away my face would sound better. And tell me it's for the best. Telling me ...

All I have to say is this: You Are Lucky. I'm not in school right now because I have Tourette's syndrome, which makes my body do stuff, like say the ...

I hope I don't sound too harsh, but I tend to start with crit, so here goes: The first stanza thingy didn't make any sense to me. I got this ...

I am a blunt and literal and down to business person, so I may seem harsh... Please, please do not take it personally. I'm just pointing out mistakes or other ...